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Rebellious girls and Esther’s song that wins Hegai’s favour and earns her likability

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Made some GREAT progress in today’s live songwriting session (number 33!) despite being very sleepy. Wrote more of melody and chords than lyrics, but here are the lyrics. Basically a few girls that got taken away were really upset, but Esther speaks boldly too about the times and chance and happenstance, basically foreshadowing the whole plot of the story, whilst earning Hegai’s favour and gaining likability amongst everyone.

HEGAI:
Welcome all women to Shushan
Now I will do the best I can
To take good care of you in your new home
and keep you safe and sound; you’re not alone!

GIRL #1:
I have been snatched away
from my home and there’s nothing I could do or say
You took away my life
my hopes and dreams are lost in shadow

GIRL #2:
I had so many plans
burnt up in flames
and you are to blame!

If I could, I would thrust
a sword in your side
for things you denied!

REBELLIOUS GIRLS:
We’re denied we’re denied we’re denied

(something something something – I’ll have to refer back to the video)

ESTHER:
Some things just happen
And don’t know when or why
Maybe it’s circumstance
for us to say goodbye

(some deep lyrics concerning chance and circumstance and time and happenstance which I don’t know how I am going to write later because it’s so deep but I’m going to try; maybe I’ll read some Proverbs or Ecclesiastes)

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Structure of the first 5 musical numbers! (Writing the Book of Esther into a musical)

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Finalizing the structure of the songs from Esther Chapter 1 through 2. Just running through

Musical numberSource from the bookContents
1Esther 1:1-12Feast of Persia – Opening number to introduce the setting and the grandeur of Persia and Media and its 127 lands, and also setting up Queen Vashti’s refusal of the king’s command.
2Esther 1:13-227 princes of Persia try to calm down and advise the king to get rid of Queen Vashti to send a message to the whole country, and introduce the idea of finding a new queen.
3Esther 2:1-4After some time, the king has really calmed down but there’s still no queen. So his servants remind him to go ahead with gathering young women to the palace in order to select a new queen. During the gathering process, some of the women will either love or hate this edict and will sing some lines.
4Esther 2:8Hegai, the eunuch, gives orientation to the women of whom he’s now in charge of. Maybe some of the women has a dispute with him and Esther defends him in an indirect way, thus starts to win Hegai’s favour, perhaps? This is Esther’s introduction and at the end of the song, Hegai asks what her name is, and she replies “Esther”, and lights out and audience applause! Haha.
5Esther 2:9-11New scene to introduce Mordecai, singing his thoughts and worries out. He also checks on Esther and Esther perhaps tells Mordecai about her first-class treatments from Hegai? Maybe… still thinking how to convey that Esther received first class treatments… It’s either this, or from Hegai, or from Esther’s female servants that Hegai bestowed on her.

Also, enjoy this “before and after” of the opening number composition!

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